Query: Deglan Rising Take 2…

Okay, here we go on the Evolution of the Query… Take 2 on Deglan Rising.

Feel free to comment and let me know what you think… it’s a work in progress but it’s close Oh and go me, I finished Deglan Rising on Friday! Wooot!

QUERY: Deglan Rising

Ten years ago a legend was born, only no one knew it.

With the Rising Ceremony looming on the horizon of the lunar eclipse, Deglan is the only member of the Teken Clan not excited about Rising. While his peer’s dream of their place in society, Deglan can’t shake the feeling he was meant for something more.

Each Teken Clansman is born with a mark, used to place them into society. Deglan’s morphing mark brings unwanted attention of the leader of the Teken Clan, Lord Arthus. Scared for his life, his parents encourage him to run and find the pale faced girl from his dreams.

Daydreamer Meia is a troubled foster child who moves to a new home every few months. When she’s not in the clouds, she spends her time in a make believe world, far from the cares of the schoolyard. Normal ten-year-old girls dream of tea parties and dolls, but not Meia. Her dreams come from the pages of an adventure book and stretch well into the fantasy world and beyond.

Meia can hardly contain her joy when her new foster parents decide to take her on the vacation of a lifetime. The Cook Islands have been the backdrop for her dreams since before she could remember.

When Deglan meets Meia on the Penrhyn atoll, both of their lives will change forever. Secrets of the legend come to life and haunt their every move. Only one minor problem… Meia is a human and Deglan is… a dragon.

Delgan Rising is a Midgrade Fantasy complete at 37,500 words.

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