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		<title>Runaway Choices, has ran away&#8230;</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[RUNAWAY CHOICES has indeed ran away&#8230; I saw it sprint for the finish line then break through the orange tape&#8230; it completed at 79,065 words. For those of you keeping track, that is 4,065 more words then I assumed I would finish at&#8230; but you have to mind the muse. And the muse pressed on [...]


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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>RUNAWAY CHOICES has indeed ran away&#8230; I saw it sprint for the finish line then break through the orange tape&#8230; it completed at 79,065 words. For those of you keeping track, that is 4,065 more words then I assumed I would finish at&#8230; but you have to mind the muse. And the muse pressed on for 4,065 words.</p>
<p><img src="http://eisleyjacobs.com/images/smallrunawaychoices.jpg" alt="" align="left" />Yup, it&#8217;s finished&#8230;Now what? Frankly, now&#8217;s the time to rejoice I don&#8217;t have to sit in front of the computer and bang out my thoughts. Now, is time to close it and let it rest in it&#8217;s pool of words&#8230; not opening it again for at least a couple weeks&#8230; no really.</p>
<p>No. Really.</p>
<p>People who haven&#8217;t completed their first novel yet won&#8217;t really grasp this concept, so I thought I would talk about the reason it&#8217;s important to allow your manuscript to rest.</p>
<p>When I completed my first novel, THE RINGS OF TIME, and took my first pass after it was done&#8230; I really struggled. I had been on this journey with these characters for five years! And though I loved my book&#8230; I was just tired.</p>
<p>I cried&#8230; a bit. It was embarrassing. I cried because I struggled with what I was reading, finding fault in everything and after deleting 12 or so pages of the first twelve pages, I had a friend tell me to close the MS and not come back until I could read it with fresh eyes.</p>
<p>Eisley say what?</p>
<p>Fresh eyes? What exactly does that mean? These are the eyes God gave me, how can they be fresh?</p>
<p>But, because I was so frustrated and I loved my MS dearly, I did it in hopes that I would not want to burn it in the closest fire.</p>
<p>A week went by, tempted to open it my friend said, &#8220;Back off Eisley!&#8221;</p>
<p>Good friend.</p>
<p>Week two. Week three. Week four. Month two&#8230; It was summer, so I had a bit more to consume my time&#8230;</p>
<p>I think at the end of month two (and after I had written some UNSEEN CHRONICLES, some RUNAWAY CHOICES, blogs and other things) I felt it was time to reopen the MS.</p>
<p>With a quick call to friend, &#8220;Yes, Eisley&#8230; you may open your MS now.&#8221;</p>
<p>*Squeeeeeeal* then *panic* in that order&#8230;</p>
<p>Would I really feel differently about my MS? Would I really have new FRESH eyes for this story? Would&#8230; would&#8230; what if&#8230; but how&#8230; plaguing thoughts.</p>
<p>&#8220;Just open the freaking thing&#8230;&#8221; Says friend. Good friend.</p>
<p>I peeked into the file, wondering what I might see. When I closed it two months ago there were black words on a white digital page with no life. No life because they had already sucked all the life from me in the last five years! Peeking into the file, I promptly minimized it, got up from my computer and ran to the kitchen for coffee&#8230; drank a full cup, paced around the computer desk, then sat again, tapping my foot wondering if I could really do this. If I would really love it all over again.</p>
<p>Cautiously, I reached for my mouse. The arrow clicked on the toolbar, restored the MS and I began to read the abandoned words on the page.</p>
<p>I read quickly, devouring the text.. I was through the third page when I realized that instead of dull black and white words on a page&#8230; I saw people, colors, sounds, smells and&#8230; was that dust on my fingers? I inhaled the scents described and gasped&#8230; I loved this manuscript!</p>
<p>I think I cried again&#8230; I am such a baby. I realized at that moment, my friend was right! Resting was exactly what my manuscript needed.</p>
<p>Dare I say, exactly what *I* needed to see my manuscript in the way it was meant to be seen. Like cracking open a much anticipated best seller&#8230; it happened. I loved my manuscript again.</p>
<p>So&#8230; RUNAWAY CHOICES will see rest time. Not sure how much; not sure when I will open it again, but it is resting and fermenting a bit.</p>


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